Alayna is living the most exciting moment of her life.... forever.

St. Joseph's Behavorial Health in Stockton..Tee Hee Hee...

Love It! I can see why she went a little crazy..David's so good at those mind games! :-)

Just a PWP I wrote a bit ago. Libby, a virgin, gets taken by David. What fun!

Finger to Chin...Yeah...this is...I recognize this...It's Your Story! And it's AWESOME! *Bows*

David finds a quote he likes

Nice insight into David's 'How far are you willing to go'....

While on the road to a great horse racing career, Serenity Wood discovers that she is no ordinary girl. She can do things even science has yet to explain. The question she asks herself is why? A brief stop in Santa Carla for a quick break lands her deep in trouble when she is suddenly hunted by vampires. When a letter arrives that she believes has all the answers proves to be false, she soon finds herself at the mercy of what she feared the most…the supernatural. .

It's so good to see Serenity and friends back again! Now, where were we?

Awesome action..biting my nails..and dare I ask..where's Paulie?!

Response to The Lost Boys 100 Drabble Challenge.

Fangtastic read, Aly! The last one was really intriguing! Is 'Terry' the little boy that lost his mother in Max's video store?? Better hope Davey Gravey doesn't catch him with the bottle! Glad it's empty or Laddie could wind up with a playmate! Hahah!

Who wants to know what's in the sand?

Aly wants to know! Hahah! But we all know who walked on it!!!! Loved the drabbles! For me, thinking of limiting myself to just 100 words is mind numbingly hard..hahaha!

The vampires of Luna Bay are dusted, the Emerson brats are safe, and Edgar can finally get a break. Well that's what he thinks. He never anticipated Sam Emerson appearing on his doorstep nor did he expect what would go down that night. In a world full of monsters and chaos, it was only a matter of time before he came face to face with the inevitable. (Post Tribe)

Oooh, man! Reading this is way better and far more suspenseful than watching that excremental wisp of action we saw at the end of The Tripe!

I feel sorry for Sam! Oooh, squee!

Excellent descriptions, and you're very careful to make an observation after your character knows a fact...for instance, your character doesn't 'know' someone's name until after she's heard it used by one of the pack members. That's a good writer's observation.

But, I'd like to know more about your runaway, Taylor. Maybe you could add to your prologue and tell us why she's running away. What about her home life is so bad? Abusive or neglecting parents? Folks too strict? Rotten kids at school?  Boyfriend issues or trouble with the law, maybe? The boys will want to know when they start talking to her.

These are just some helpful suggestions...use them or toss them at will. Good luck with your story!

Kaleena Williams Would Seem Like Your Average Girl. She Lived In Santa Carla When She Was 15 And Met The Lost Boys. The Night At the Emerson's House, Kaleena Thinks David Is Dead. Years Later, She Finds Out He's Back For Her.

I like the poem at the beginning. Really nice. But could you do one favor and not capitalize every word? It makes this story very hard to read. Just capitalize the first word of each sentence, the first letter of someone's name (or last name), the letter I if referring to yourself, and place names (like Santa Carla). If you need help you can request a beta. Thanks.