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Title: I See Reviewer: LostNTheShadows Signed

I think this is could be the start of a great story.  I'd love to see Sam slip into uncontrollable paranoia about what happened.  He sees vampires everywhere!  And what if they're not delusions?  More have come!  I'm wondering where this still go, although you did say this was a oneshot.



Author's Response:

Anything posted in Insights is just a one-shot.  I'm taking characters from the film and exploring their minds and my own interpretations of them to get to know them better and develop them more.  One of my struggles in Lost Boys fanfiction is that I don't feel I know some of the characters well enough so this is a way of helping me portray them better.  While the one-shots won't be continued in Insights, you've definately got me interested in exploring this one-shot and using it as a starting point for new fics.  I never thought of that potential and now I have ideas swimming around in my head! I'm definately going to take what you said into consideration and start planning something for a future project.  Thank you very much!

Date: August 05, 2010 8:47:19 am [Report This]
Title: I See Reviewer: Chika Signed

Niiiiice! Sam's fear and paranoia and...guilt?...practically pours off the screen. He seems to have grown up from the event as well.

If you don't mind me being nitpicky, though-the part talking about Max seems a little unfinished. Iunno why, but it almost lacked the finishing spot about Max for me. FabuLOUS job, though!



Author's Response:

Just re-read it now and I agree with you.  I'm finding it too abrupt.  I'll leave it for now while I work on some other things but I'm going to come back and tidy that up a bit.  Not too much though, I might leave a complete reflection on Max and what he did in that scene to Lucy where I'll go into more detail. :)

Date: July 28, 2010 5:44:15 pm [Report This]
Title: I See Reviewer: CutiePie Anonymous

Good start so far. It really gives a look into Sam's head after what happened, the emoions that he's feeling. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Date: July 28, 2010 9:32:13 am [Report This]


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